Thursday, June 27, 2013

My Writing - It's My Life

This is my this weeks writing on a girl how wins a book competition called Maya.
Chapter 1
Maya lay there with tears rushing down her rosy red cheeks, her face sunk into her pillow. Her bright blond hair sat on the tips of her shoulders, glowing blue eyes filled with tears stared at the ground.  Maya heard the clip clop of her Nanny’s shoes coming up the stairs, she wiped away the tears. She sat up and picked up her book, a tear dripped down her cheek and onto the the page leaving behind a stain.

The creaky door flew open and her Nanny walk in and sat with her on her little bed. Her Nanny's hand reached out to touch her hand " I know you're sad pumpkin but please come down stairs "
" Ok Nanny, I will come down in a bit" replied Maya . Maya was upset because it was her birthday and she didn't get anything from her Mum not even a card. Her Nanny left the room and went downstairs to make her favourite  dinner mac and cheese. Maya’s mum had lifted her when she was little, sometimes on her birthday she got a card from and if she was lucky she got something little.
A little book covered in bits and bops laid on Mayas bed, in it written with neat writing:   
Dear Diary
Today was my birthday, I turned 13 teenager yay  . I’m a bit sad though because I didn’t get anything for mum not even a card or a letter. I know that mum left me but sometimes she sends me things on days like my birthday and Christmas today at school Summer Rose give me a new diary that she handmade, I really like it too. Any way for tea Nanny’s making my favourite, Mac and cheese. All is the same with Jamie she is still bullying me and Summer Rose. Tonight is a full moon and i hope to see a shooting star.
                                 Love Maya  

Chapter two

" Tea time Maya , come to the dinner table " called Nanny
" Ok, Coming Nanny "replied Maya. They sat at the dinner table eating their tea .After tea Maya noticed the newspaper poking out on the chair, maya saw on the front page in bold black thick  letters” Writing competition for ages 10 and up” the winner gets their writing made into a book. Maya went and had a bubble bath and then she went to bed. Maya started to get to work she, got out her notepad and pen, she started planning and thinking of and idea something good that people will like.She had an idea that she thought would be good and know one would do, One about her life. “Hey Nanny I’m going to enter the writing competition for kids, it was in the newspaper,”
“ Thats cool honey, what are you going to do it about “
“ My life “ said Maya.

Chapter three

Maya hopped into her nice warm bed and snuggled down. All night she tossed and turned in her bed because she keep, thinking about the writing competition and what would happen if she won. To Maya winning is like the world because she had  lost her Mum not to anything bad, she just left one day when she was only 6 years old and she hasn't seen her since.

" Maya Maya, time to get up " it was her Nanny leaning over telling her to get up for school. Maya had a big yawn and then hope out of bed and got dressed for school.  She made her way slowly down stairs to the kitchen. Maya stuffed her feet along the old flora carpet in the hallway. Maya chummed on her breakfast and skulked down her milk. Before she knew it was time to go to school, all the way there she didn't say a word just sat there.
Chapter 4
Maya walked into school with a grin on her face. She ran up behind her best friend Summer Rose, she had thick brown hair covered in ringlets, dull green eyes  gazed into the distance. “ Hey, Summer Rose, guess what? “ Maya said happily.
“What?”Summer Rose replied
“ I have entered the young writers competition, if you win you get it made into a real book”.
“ Wow thats so cool Maya, what is it about”
“ My life”.
Chapter four
Maya spent all lunch planning things out for her book, Summer Rose sat and help her too. everyone walked past them thing what are they doing, doing homework during school?.
Later that day when the girls were going home they past a big bull board that had “Young writers competition, enter now online or full in the form”. Then you would never guess how came walking past, Mrs perfected Hollie Cat. “ Well hello, hello there Maya, if you did know I’m entering the writing competition “
“ Really Hollie, really you ”
“ Yep me and do you want to know something, my mum is very good friends with they jugie ”.
Maya and Summer Rose walked off home they looked back at Hollie and her so called friends, Hollie just laugh and walked away.
Chapter five
When Maya got home she went up to her room and sat on her her bounce bed. she pulled out her bag and got out her planning book. She ducked her head under her bed and got out her diary. She went into the office and started writing the start of her story. She coped word for word out of her diary. Each chapter had about a month worth of writing in it. Maya was so brave to put all of her feeling and thoughts into a book.



Maya walked into school where everyone was waiting for her arrive. What seemed to be lines and lines of people were waiting. She felt funny inside and didn't know why too. It was because she had won the book fair young writers competition, her writing was going to be made into a book.  Maya was so happy she was over the moon. Maya screamed with joy and jumped up and down. Summer Rose run up to her and give her a big hug.

That day when Maya got home she burst through the door with excitement, “Nanny Nanny guess what?"
"What Maya?”
"I won, I won the young writers comp "
" Really?" screamed her Nanny with excitement. That night they snuggled down together on the couch and read the book Maya had Written - This is my life.

                                                                  The end

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